This poem is very silly and boring because it pretty much talks about an elderly man which I really couldn’t find anything entreating in it. 

The plot was boring and uninteresting for me and it felt like torture for me because it really was the generic plot for poems which of course is that everyone is getting older no matter what 

The writing style here was super bad as well and it really made this poem to a torture of reading it.

I Give This Sonnet 1 / 5